Thursday, January 5

the invisible gate

I.
how he died in glory
(some say a written story)
the son of God
unknowingly
blood-paved the worded journey

II.
and upon this blood
the filial son
bled a red gate of mercy
and cried to us 'here is the way, but
come only if you wont hurt me
'

III.
now here lies a wounded God
prisoned, for us to peer
but oh, not too near
stained as we are
by humane sins of folly.

3 Comments:

Blogger aeryn said...

you are fast!!

see what a title like 'the invisible gate' can spawn ...

renga ley!

5:39 PM  
Blogger aeryn said...

if you think about it God is prisoned in his own heaven and so are we, all because of that gate. and all because we hurt him deep, that he requires us to pass a gate to reach him ...

ehehehe.

6:34 PM  
Blogger pensivehour said...

I'm here!!!
GOSH!
I love this one~ Brilliant!

7:16 PM  

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